Distant Voice

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Distant Voice

March 10, 2004, 11:29 am

Come sing to me your midnight whisperslay your dreams upon my thirsty brow,touch your eyes where gentle moments lingertaste my life in gales of passionate sound.Trapped behind these troubled waters of...

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March 10, 2004, 11:59 am

Loved the way you started and finished this poem. This piece reminds me of when I have to work abroad and I dream of home and my wife. A beautiful piece. Greeneaglz

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March 10, 2004, 1:31 pm

pain and such a depth of longing ... yet tempered by the beauty and sanctuary of that distant voice ... a poignant plea, raven, with lovely images crafted throughout. really like the re-use of lines...

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March 10, 2004, 3:08 pm

So Sad And yet so warm in its flowWell Done

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March 10, 2004, 8:02 pm

Thank you Greeneaglz, Beth and H to H for your lovely replies. I originally intended this piece to be a song, but I don't know how to write music...

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March 11, 2004, 12:11 am

This is a very inviting, soothing read with romantic undertones. I enjoyed. Thanks.

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March 11, 2004, 11:34 am

Glad you enjoyed this, evening blue, and thanks for the kind words!

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March 11, 2004, 12:47 pm

A lovely piece, Raven! Expressing longing, sadness, and of course - hope and joy. Very good.

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March 11, 2004, 5:58 pm

An invitation, a plea, and a supplication....intriguing structure and rhyme scheme too...enjoyed! Every new beginning comes fromsome other beginnings end...Why not try a new beginning...at The...

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March 11, 2004, 10:34 pm

Raven that is sorrowful and quite beautiful."Come sing to me your midnight whisperslay your dreams upon my thirsty brow,touch your eyes where gentle moments lingertaste my life in gales of passionate...

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March 13, 2004, 12:07 pm

Thank you for kind words, Davie; glad you liked!Glad you enjoyed, Paul. I'm not much of a rhyming poetry writer, but I was trying to compose lyrics for a song (I just can't write the music part!)Thank...

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March 14, 2004, 6:03 pm

Raven---make that a sigh...a long one.The sort of poem I wish I had written...

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March 14, 2004, 8:11 pm

Make that a dittoRouge

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March 16, 2004, 2:45 am

this is awesome. i love the anachronistic statements. two opposing concepts within the same thought. taste the sound, for instance. beautifully written.

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